What if Shiva was a man as human as anyone can be thrust with an enormous burden of responsibility to fight for good and vanquish evil, thrust with a stature of god for reasons he cannot come to terms with, and not a worker of miracles like the lore says?
What a brilliant premise for a work of fiction? Amish does not disappoint. He has woven a fine work of classic Indian masala with a stage of all too familiar mythological names with a good dose of magic, bravery, brotherhood, romance and social issues into a story that often teeters to the grade of a B grade flick. But it is gripping nevertheless.
A self doubting , grounded and flawed man that Shiva is , instantly wins the reader's affection as a good hearted leader of a neighborhood youth brigade. Amish portrays Shiva as a people's leader who detests being bestowed any titular position and constantly reminds others that he is their friend and not a Lord as they often call him.
He has been lured out of his homeland at the base of the great Himalayas into the all too ideal land of Meluha that is the land of Suryavanshis, the descendants of Lord Ram! He has been sought out and crowned as Neelkanth who is prophesied to be the saviour of all that stands for good. Like any grounded man, Shiva is at first baffled at this coronation. Soon and very soon, he finds himself in the midst of terrorist attacks and finds himself successfully defending the soon to be his sweet heart Sati from the hands of a powerful Naga (evil deformed monsters) who are after Sati, thereby further influencing the Meluhan's conviction that he is the Mahadev.
Soon, Shiva finds himself leading a battle against the Chandravanshis who are blamed for the repeated terrorist attacks on the Suryavanshi villages. The book weaves the plot leading up to the grand battle scene that stirs the reader's imaginations with its detailed formations and fights.
Amish does a fine job developing the characters in the book. Many of them are stellar personalities worth admiring. Parvateshwar the general is a worthy mention for his stern and yet fair demeanour towards Shiva. Needless to say, Shiva himself admires Parvateshwar for his righteousness.
Sati is another fine character Amish weaves into the book. The sparring between Shiva and Sati during the initial stages of the book is endearing for its brilliant dichotomy in the behavior of the two characters. Shiva his unabashedly brazen advances to be close with Sati while Sati herself a dignity personified flame that refuses to be disturbed by the winds that Shiva is, trying to swirl around and win her heart.
Where Amish Falters, is in his imagination and creativity. His imagination of Meluha is all to familiar modern day City but placed in the BC 1900s. It does not interest a reader that a 1900BC city actually has water taps or under ground drains. What has been squandered away is an opportunity to do a J.K.Rowling on this mythical and yet ideal city of Meluha. Likewise the concept of Ayodhya being an uncouth society full of citizens every ready to indulge their desires of flesh is all too unimaginative and belongs in a B-Grade Hollywood flick some Chennai Based former Tennis aces would have produced out of Hollywood.
It has been said before and I repeat it, the conversations and phrases used are sometimes too American and seems tailored to the American audience than to the originality of character. "Is that the best line you can come up with " , "Is she spoken for".. are modern day usages that seem rather out of place in a book that is placed so far before Christ. Thankfully we don't have any characters using 'Holy Christ'.
Having pointed out the flaws, they can be forgiven for the sake of the overall story which is gripping and engaging to the last line. Hopefully Amish has saved enough delicacies to last two more books of the trilogy. The second part, the Secret of Nagas due in a month hopefully would be as interesting if not better than the first one.
Go for it, you may find yourself sneering in the beginning, but its a good book towards the end. The characters have been introduced, traps laid, let the story unfold Amish.
One more thing. While the characters are all too familiar mythological Hindu gods and their aides, the story itself has little to do with their mythology. Its important that young readers do not confuse the story to be the real story of Shiva. It is not.
